Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Hippo

 
The HipPo
The hippo is very big
Strong and fat
 It is brown and has sharp teeth and smelly too
It is large and giant
I feel happy
The Hippo
by:  Anisha


 
Hippo
By:Aryan
Red,  black,  grey, pink
It swims, drinks and eats
Small ears, sharp and large teeth and small nose!
Smooth and soft
Small as a tiger
It was hungry!



 
 
 Hippo
By: Sabine
Smelly smelly
Giant, wet
Big mouth
Sharp teeth
Big nails
Small ears
The Hippo


 
Hippo
BY    SANDRO 
I t’s  FAT   
It  EATS   LiKE   RICE
IT   is BIG  like  The HUlK


hippo
By  daniel
it has a big bottom
it has a big mouth
it has 2 big teeth 





Hippo
By Joshua
Fat
And Big Mouth
sharp teeth
And it has small ears
And a small tail
Gray
        And VERY  it’s stinky
And it has four teeth
rough


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21 comments:

  1. Asma Gajurel (Lamsal)May 14, 2012 at 12:39 AM

    Impressive............good written about Hippo.

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  2. AnonymousMay 14, 2012 at 5:10 AM

    Hi Daniel. Big it is! Keep going.

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  3. Joshua SilvanusMay 14, 2012 at 6:44 AM

    Anisha that was an excellent poem keep up the good job
    Joshua Silvanus

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  4. Joshua SilvanusMay 14, 2012 at 6:46 AM

    Aryan that poem was a whacker
    Joshua Silvanus

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  5. Joshua SilvanusMay 14, 2012 at 6:48 AM

    Sabine that was a beautiful poem
    Joshua Silvanus

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  6. Joshua SilvanusMay 14, 2012 at 6:49 AM

    Sandro you are truly a Marvel fan
    Joshua Silvanus

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  7. Joshua SilvanusMay 14, 2012 at 6:52 AM

    Good poem Daniel
    Joshua Silvanus

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  8. Parthav SinghMay 14, 2012 at 6:56 AM

    Dear Anisha,

    I like what you wrote about hippo

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  9. Parthav SinghMay 14, 2012 at 6:59 AM

    Dear Aryan (My best buddy),

    I like your poem about hippo

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  10. Parthav SinghMay 14, 2012 at 7:01 AM

    Dear Sabine,

    You have invented a great poem about the hippo

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  11. Parthav SinghMay 14, 2012 at 7:03 AM

    Dear Sandro,

    I like HULK!

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  12. Parthav SinghMay 14, 2012 at 7:05 AM

    Dear Daniel,

    I like big teeth

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  13. Parthav SinghMay 14, 2012 at 7:06 AM

    Dear Joshua,

    I like your poem about hippo

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  14. Sandro sharasheMay 14, 2012 at 8:13 AM

    Nice stories about hippo.
    By Sandro

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  15. ZoyaMay 15, 2012 at 12:48 PM

    Dear anisha your poem was super cool i like your poem
    From your best friend zoya lari

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  16. AnonymousMay 17, 2012 at 8:43 PM

    Great Work :-)

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  17. Shariq LariMay 24, 2012 at 2:49 AM

    Der Sabine,

    I like your poem was cool

    From your best friend Zoya

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  18. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2013 at 10:12 PM

    I like that you think about it

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  19. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2013 at 10:14 PM

    I like how you yustline braks

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