Monday, May 14, 2012

Elephant


Elephant
By:  Anisha
 
long trunck short tail
fat too
big and  strong  flat ears  
Gray  skin
The Elephant
 
Elephant
By: Raghav
Huge  
Big ears and long trunk
Grayish and black
Long eyelashes
Strong and big tusk
Slow nice and beautiful

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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 15, 2012 at 5:14 AM

    Dear Best friend Raghav ,
    your elephant poem was aoesome

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  2. ZoyaMay 15, 2012 at 7:46 AM

    Dear raghav your elephant poem was so so cool from zoya lari

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  3. SandroMay 22, 2012 at 12:13 AM

    Cool poem, I loved it.
    Sandro

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  4. rajanMay 22, 2012 at 8:00 AM

    so cool

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2013 at 9:44 PM

    you rock.

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2013 at 10:07 PM

    I really like the way you used descriptive words!

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