Sunday, May 13, 2012

Leopards


Leopards
By:  Sambed
Sharp teeth
Black dots
Swishy Tail
Some Strips next to the nose
Whiskers
Black nose
Yellow body and sooooooooo
Soft
 
LEoPaRDs
By:    SANDRO
YELLOW
AND  BLACK
LOooonnnNggggggG  Tail
DOTS
Scary and   hungry
Faster  than  a  car
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13 comments:

  1. Asma Gajurel (Lamsal)May 14, 2012 at 12:28 AM

    Keep it up my children. You have written a good poem. I appreciate your knowledge about the body parts and characteristics of Leopard.

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  2. ParthavMay 14, 2012 at 6:36 AM

    Dear Sambed,

    I like your poem that you wrote about leopard.

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  3. Joshua SilvanusMay 14, 2012 at 6:40 AM

    Sambed you have done an excellent job on the poem
    Joshua

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  4. ParthavMay 14, 2012 at 6:41 AM

    Dear Sandro,

    I like your line that you wrote about leopard....faster than a car!

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  5. Joshua SilvanusMay 14, 2012 at 6:42 AM

    Sandro that poem of yours was classy
    Joshua Silvanus

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  6. Aurelie FontanaMay 14, 2012 at 6:43 AM

    Dear Sandro,
    I love how you compare leopard being faster than a car

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  7. mons lohofMay 14, 2012 at 7:08 AM

    Dear Sandro

    Your poem is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  8. Zoya LariMay 14, 2012 at 8:18 AM

    Dear Sandro,
    I like your poem it is cool. Good job

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  9. SandroMay 15, 2012 at 7:58 AM

    Thank you, man!!!!!!!

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2013 at 9:16 PM

    yay goodjob
    i love you

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2013 at 9:16 PM

    goodjob on your poem

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2013 at 9:18 PM

    yay
    i love thet

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  13. AnonymousMay 12, 2013 at 3:18 AM

    i like ur poem raghav from VIPASWI

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