Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Monkey


Monkey
by Mons Lohof
 Like a human
Hairy
long tail
Its feet are like
Hands
And the worst thing
Are his
Sharp teeth

Monkey

By: Sambed
Hairy
Long tail
Small face
Long hands
Big claws
Small teeth
Small body
Brown eyes
Small mouth
Big ear
Says “Chaaa”
The Monkey 

 

16 comments:

  1. Asma Gajurel (Lamsal)May 14, 2012 at 12:34 AM

    Well done ....you did the great job. Keep on doing...........

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  2. Very nice Mons
    Joshua

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  3. So very nice Sambed
    Joshua

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  4. Dear Mons,

    Your poem is awesome !

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  5. I love your poem, Mons. I also think monkeys are like humans, but their teeth are sometimes kind of cute.

    Love,
    Mommy

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  6. Dear Sambed,

    I like your poem. Its cool and awesome!

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  7. Sandro SharashenidzeMay 14, 2012 at 8:20 AM

    Dear Mons, love your description, nice.
    By Sandro

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  8. Dear Mons,

    Your poem was very informative about monkeys, and I liked the picture you took.

    The font you used was easy for grandma to read.

    Keep up the good work,
    Grandma

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  9. Mons...love your poem about the monkeys, but you forgot to mention that they also poop a lot!!!! Hardly wait to see you guys next month. Love, Uncle Bob

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  10. Great, descriptive poem, Mons! If sharp teeth are the worst thing about a monkey, I wonder what their best thing is--maybe that they're so human-like? Your poem really makes me wonder... Great job! Love, dad.

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  11. Dear mons your poem is nice
    I like whan u say hairy

    Love,
    Zoya

    Good gob mons

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  12. you are vvvveeeeerrrryyyyy awsome!

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